I like my prose to sound good when you read it out loud which leads to people giving me feedback being like “why did you use this word so many times it’s redundant” like have you tried reading it out loud though it sounds pretty cool
Sometimes I need to hear that I’ve been repeating myself too much but sometimes people seem to want me to just tell them who the murderer is like no why are you reading literary fiction if you just want things in simple sentences I’ll start describing the Paris sewer system in detail just to spite you if you keep doing that